your screenplay doctor
Your screenplay deserves more than notes. It deserves perspective shaped by real production experience. With three produced feature films, secured distribution deals, and projects that have reached audiences worldwide, I bring a filmmaker’s eye to every script. My work is also housed in the Academy of Motion Picture Arts and Sciences library, reflecting a commitment to storytelling that stands up at the highest level. The goal isn’t just to improve your screenplay, but to elevate it to a place where it’s ready for the next real step forward.
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Scene Enhancement
I will write and edit directly within your screenplay, enhancing individual scenes to strengthen momentum and clarity. Action is sharpened to move the story forward with purpose, while dialogue is refined to be more engaging, specific, and character-driven. I ensure each character has a distinct, authentic voice, creating scenes that read cleaner, play stronger, and land with greater impact.
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Story Suggestions
I will identify where scenes should be added, removed, or restructured to strengthen momentum and deepen engagement. These story-level suggestions are designed to create greater intrigue, clarify intent, and amplify the underlying meaning of the screenplay. New scenes are proposed conceptually and not written, giving you clear, actionable direction while preserving your authorship and voice.
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Screenplay Review
I will read your screenplay purely as an audience member and offer an honest, subjective review of the experience. Every audience is an audience of one, so my focus is whether the story succeeds on its own terms, fulfills the expectations of its genre, and feels original, engaging, and emotionally compelling. I will share where the script pulls me in, where it excites me, and where it risks losing momentum or interest, all from the perspective of whether this is a movie I would want to watch.
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Two Week Turnaround
From a pre-agreed start date, I will complete all selected services and return your screenplay within two weeks. This turnaround is firm and intentional, allowing for focused, uninterrupted attention while giving you a clear timeline you can rely on. You will know exactly when to expect your materials, with no open-ended waits or uncertainty.
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